Environ 1

1:47 min

I believe my main problem is with the water. I need to portray it better and figure out how water meets land. Huy Tran though states that my problem is shape and value and so my next few ones will probably be black and white.

References:

http://imgur.com/5ihlPbB

http://orange.35photo.ru/photos/20130522/527531.jpg

http://i.imgur.com/eDi5Vdj.jpg

http://i.imgur.com/U5R5tgj.jpg